Presentation commentttttt

After seeing my presentation on ClickView I have some more comments to make in addition to my old ones. I reckon mine was a good presentation, overall. However there are several points where I should work on.Firs of all, instead of pointing to the audience, I looked at the screen far too much. Moreover I noticed that I tend to repeat the same words again and again (bunch) or connective ones (like).Then I said "whatever" and "everything", because I didn't have the right word...For what concern the technical part of the presentation I an aware that the fact that I needed to go to the laptop and click, has stopped the flow of the presentation itself.Finally if I had to do it again, I would take that long quotation away of the presentation, because it distracted the audience while I was talking.